I chose
Sharon's lightbox piece to critique.
The image shows the artist, face off-camera, with a black swirling mass in her chest. This is a result of using Photoshop to edit a photo taken of the artist.
The composition falls nicely in the rule of thirds as the subject is set to the right and her right arm is extended on the bottom horizontal line, with the hole close to the bottom right intersection. There is enough negative space on the left to give the piece room to breathe. The hole is framed by her hands, enforcing natural framing that helps guide the eye to it; it is also not a hard-edged hole, which suggests constant movement.
Painting the lightbox white and using a warm colour as a backdrop brings a comforting feeling, however this is offset by the obscured face, the rigid formation of the fingers, and the dark space where her heart is meant to be. The solemn facial expression suggests a sense of detachment, while the hands look posed and ready to take action to control the hole. I am reminded of the nihilistic themes of Nietzche's work, in which he describes humanity's struggle with meaning in life and existence.
Sharon's piece works as a constructive narrative and as an exploration of identity. The camera angle and composition is cinematic and can easily be inserted into a narrative film. The audience is left with questions as to why a hole exists in the character: is it figurative, or literal? What has caused this person to possess a hole, and what will happen next? As for identity, the emphasis on the internal struggle and the hidden face allows the viewer to see themselves as the subject.
What makes this work succeed is its minimalism, and the posture of the illuminated hands contrasts very well with the blurry but dark hole. The work could be improved by limiting the position of the hole to the heart, as the black covers almost the entire chest, but the idea is conveyed clearly regardless.
Lai, Sharon. "The Minimalist." The Minimalist. N.p., 7 Nov. 2016. Web. 27 Nov. 2016. <http://sharonlai22.tumblr.com/post/152877709351>.